I just downloaded and finished the game in the weekend and i love it's so much, it's quite different from what i thought it's would be. The story and the vibe of this game giving me a alot of thought, i have so much questions like what with the weird robot and stuff. I have a theory that the Eye/Heart/Void have something to do with how we get here and all the traumatic dream. Can't wait for the next update.
i like this game. The story is so complicated and weird but good for me to play. But i have a question why Murrak eyes glow up blue like ice? because it glow up when he is angry or some emotion too much( that may explain why he just think blue jacket better when i wear Rhoun red jacket.)
Every dateable character has an artificial body part by a lucky stroke of fate. Marruk, for instance, has an artificial eye that allows itself to glow.
I downloaded a previous version some time ago, but had not the time to read it. I started a couple days ago and must say this is really good! I want to know what's going on! I hope this project keeps growing. These character feel so realistic and lovable! You are creating a great work here!
"This game is currently SFW. This will change in future updates."
Assuming you mean sex scenes, then yeah none currently. But it is building relationships with the characters at the moment which is nice instead of just 2 days in and being like "I LOVE YOU!".
There is some gore and horror which could count as a higher age rating? Maybe not 18+ though. Idrk how they categorise gore for age ratings.
Yeah that is certainly one thing I like about it, the VN is pretty long yet the most we have is like the MC having a few… slightly suggestive thoughts that are immediately dismissed. I think the good pacing already ranks the VN pretty high in terms of realistic relationships even if we haven’t actually seen any lol.
Yeah, I enjoy relationships in VNs but some are definitely not realistic... Like declaring love for someone you have known for 2-3 days (Burrows). The dialogue flows nicely here, I think after the apology from MC will be the beginning of showing more care and romance between him and partner.
Why must all the good visual novels be unfinished? Like I get it's a process, and I'm grateful we can have a visual novel of this quality for free, but tbh I'd rather shell out $25 for a finished game then have every VN I read abruptly end the moment I get invested. So frustrating, but if that's my only complaint I guess you have a good thing going, so well done.
Dang, just got to the end of the current version for Marruk... I will once again have to wait for a couple of updates to consume them all at once. Although may play Rhoun's for this version too...
Loving the story, glad to see I sort of guessed one thing about translating. There was some good suspense building.
I look forward to Marruk opening up, MC apologising, and wherever the story is going to lead.
Edit because I forgot! Love the different emotions and facial expressions for everyone, it adds a lot to their dialogue, especially when it is Marruk smiling :P
Wow I was pleasantly surprised by how engaging this VN was! Loving it so far! Marruk is husband material and I can't wait to see his and the MC's story develop further
Can i just say I totally should of read the tags for this game before just mindlessly trying it, i've only done what id just call the rhoun route so far I dont know how much difference there is with what happens but day like 15 was something i was not prepared for.
Not because of its content, but because I didn't see the time spent playing it! It's so interesting and exciting to read! It's really easy to immerse yourself in the universe, which is well fleshed out.
I really like the character of Tyr. I think he's my second favorite character. I really like the fact that he seems to have as many qualities as flaws. I like this kind of pragmatic character you can't quite figure out. Does he have good intentions? Does he really feel responsible for our coming here? Is he lying to us all the time? Personally, I'm convinced that deep down he's a good person, but unfortunately his project is too dangerous for my taste, and I'm afraid he'll never admit it... Nor does he seem blameless in his treatment of Marrowyn.
He clearly seems to have lied about certain moments in his past. I'm curious to find out what he's hiding. I have the impression that he has avoided talking about certain difficult moments in his life. And I don't think he's ever confided in anyone.
Unfortunately, given the end of our discussion, he's not likely to tell us the whole truth about his past for a long time, I think, ahah.
In any case, I hope we can help him, especially in his relationship with Marrowyn. But I don't think there's much we can do for him. After all, it's already complicated enough for us and our guardians. I hope things turn out better for him, but unfortunately I think he's the kind of character who comes to a tragic end.
There are a few choices but beyond choosing your ‘love interest’ (theres no romance, yet) choices are far and few between so there probably wont be much in the path department.
Ok, I was certainly not expecting that turn of events... stars above and below, that was incredible... My heart alamos couldn't contain my excitement !
also, [spoilers ahead!!!]
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I think we may have awakened an previously unliving thing... concept made form, screaming as we ripped it from an abstract cradle of nothingness, tearing it and giving it form from the raw void as we passed... And I am all in for this bit of cosmic horror. I have to say, My survival instincts may be broke, but this being actually didn't bring me fear, even with the loads of body horror...
And I'm also absolutely convinced that Tir is the one to blame for it. Battery my ass, that the Mæron (is this right?) is definitely somehow alive.
PS: giving our luck so far, i'm betting that the CEO of BigCorp™ is coming instead of a simple technician.
FFR if anybody else is reading this, yes the MC is a human. It would be crazy to create an isekai alien ‘abduction’ VN only for the MC to basically be, to us, an alien.
Is it weird that despite the MC's pov I have found nothing that Marrowyn has said or done to be creepy or unexpected?
Maybe I'm just bias for Marrowyn because I'm not so secretly hoping the MC accidentally gets a little bit smooshed by his belly while they are in an elevator or something! Eheheh...
Alright, I HAD to create an account just to leave a comment;
I absolutely FUCKING love your work! The writing, the setting(Sprites, OST & BGs included, stellar work on the artist/s part), the characters and their idiosyncrasies, the flow, feel, and pacing, and the lore—oh man, don’t even get me started on the lore, enigmas, theories and the copious notes I've filled in my logs while experiencing everyone's route... Because, I just couldn’t get enough of it!!
I am so infatuated by everything, and I can’t wait to see more<3
With that said, Marrowyn for the win. Fite me.
Ps; I was so smitten with Nöcce during Marruk’s route, that I’m seriously considering in creating a fanfiction for him in case he doesn't get an actual route. Because…… I mean, come on! He’s such an adorable giant! (After Marrow, of course. Totally not biased, I swear.)
And sure, you might risk getting nibbled if you get too close, but hey, who wouldn't want a love nibble from a towering cutie like him?
There's just something about his quiet and indifferent stoic countenance that makes me want to hug him and bring a contented smile to his face. :3
Sorry for the rent, just stellar work overall and again, can’t wait to see what happens next!
These are so gooooodD!!!! You drew tUcker SO HOT LMAO! AArgh I don't really have an instagram, I went over and liked them but idk how to share them better! Theyre so good seriously!
I like the game, hehe, but I have a question, did the protagonist always
(Spoiler Warning)
Did the MC always enrraged in the 3rd day? I could swear he was crying when I readed it first time, maybe I were very tired as I readed this at night, tbh, Idk, I liked it, but if it never happened then I guess its fine
Been here for a year now and I’ve gotta say I’m impressed with the growth of this game! Loving the sprite redesigns so far (especially Marruk) and the music is top tier. The writing of the characters is also very well done and I’m looking forward to future updates. After what they’ve been through, Marruk and Tucker both need a hug and some vacation time that’s for sure.
I have version 2.1 and I could not find your game on itch search and could not find a link in the game I have downloaded to this page either. It would be good to put a link to the game's page or the accounts you post the game under in the games itself so people like me have a easier time finding the game if we forgot to follow you on itch. I only found it because I had the idea to look it up on google.
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There will be a SFW version of the game yes
i like the ost
Yeah! It's awesome!
I just downloaded and finished the game in the weekend and i love it's so much, it's quite different from what i thought it's would be. The story and the vibe of this game giving me a alot of thought, i have so much questions like what with the weird robot and stuff. I have a theory that the Eye/Heart/Void have something to do with how we get here and all the traumatic dream. Can't wait for the next update.
I can't wait for the next update i need me some marrow 😭
i like this game. The story is so complicated and weird but good for me to play. But i have a question why Murrak eyes glow up blue like ice? because it glow up when he is angry or some emotion too much( that may explain why he just think blue jacket better when i wear Rhoun red jacket.)
Every dateable character has an artificial body part by a lucky stroke of fate. Marruk, for instance, has an artificial eye that allows itself to glow.
I downloaded a previous version some time ago, but had not the time to read it. I started a couple days ago and must say this is really good! I want to know what's going on! I hope this project keeps growing. These character feel so realistic and lovable! You are creating a great work here!
Love this VN and this is a bit nitpicky but it doesn’t make much sense for these aliens to understand nodding/head-shaking.
This novel has 18+ scenes?
"This game is currently SFW. This will change in future updates."
Assuming you mean sex scenes, then yeah none currently. But it is building relationships with the characters at the moment which is nice instead of just 2 days in and being like "I LOVE YOU!".
There is some gore and horror which could count as a higher age rating? Maybe not 18+ though. Idrk how they categorise gore for age ratings.
Yeah that is certainly one thing I like about it, the VN is pretty long yet the most we have is like the MC having a few… slightly suggestive thoughts that are immediately dismissed. I think the good pacing already ranks the VN pretty high in terms of realistic relationships even if we haven’t actually seen any lol.
Yeah, I enjoy relationships in VNs but some are definitely not realistic... Like declaring love for someone you have known for 2-3 days (Burrows). The dialogue flows nicely here, I think after the apology from MC will be the beginning of showing more care and romance between him and partner.
Why must all the good visual novels be unfinished? Like I get it's a process, and I'm grateful we can have a visual novel of this quality for free, but tbh I'd rather shell out $25 for a finished game then have every VN I read abruptly end the moment I get invested. So frustrating, but if that's my only complaint I guess you have a good thing going, so well done.
you sound entitled
please yes. i love it
My only complaint is that it's not done
Dang, just got to the end of the current version for Marruk... I will once again have to wait for a couple of updates to consume them all at once. Although may play Rhoun's for this version too...
Loving the story, glad to see I sort of guessed one thing about translating. There was some good suspense building.
I look forward to Marruk opening up, MC apologising, and wherever the story is going to lead.
Edit because I forgot! Love the different emotions and facial expressions for everyone, it adds a lot to their dialogue, especially when it is Marruk smiling :P
Wow I was pleasantly surprised by how engaging this VN was! Loving it so far! Marruk is husband material and I can't wait to see his and the MC's story develop further
Professor Senno is out here working on a Dead Space Marker
is this guy called Rhoun actually will hate me if i play his route?
question about this vn,does it have any romance spice? i meann duhh
Can i just say I totally should of read the tags for this game before just mindlessly trying it, i've only done what id just call the rhoun route so far I dont know how much difference there is with what happens but day like 15 was something i was not prepared for.
God tier
A
Spoilers :
Well, this update really frustrated me...
Not because of its content, but because I didn't see the time spent playing it! It's so interesting and exciting to read! It's really easy to immerse yourself in the universe, which is well fleshed out.
I really like the character of Tyr. I think he's my second favorite character. I really like the fact that he seems to have as many qualities as flaws. I like this kind of pragmatic character you can't quite figure out. Does he have good intentions? Does he really feel responsible for our coming here? Is he lying to us all the time? Personally, I'm convinced that deep down he's a good person, but unfortunately his project is too dangerous for my taste, and I'm afraid he'll never admit it... Nor does he seem blameless in his treatment of Marrowyn.
He clearly seems to have lied about certain moments in his past. I'm curious to find out what he's hiding. I have the impression that he has avoided talking about certain difficult moments in his life. And I don't think he's ever confided in anyone.
Unfortunately, given the end of our discussion, he's not likely to tell us the whole truth about his past for a long time, I think, ahah.
In any case, I hope we can help him, especially in his relationship with Marrowyn. But I don't think there's much we can do for him. After all, it's already complicated enough for us and our guardians. I hope things turn out better for him, but unfortunately I think he's the kind of character who comes to a tragic end.
Amazing work!
is this a linear VN?
There are a few choices but beyond choosing your ‘love interest’ (theres no romance, yet) choices are far and few between so there probably wont be much in the path department.
Ok, I was certainly not expecting that turn of events... stars above and below, that was incredible... My heart alamos couldn't contain my excitement !
also, [spoilers ahead!!!]
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
I think we may have awakened an previously unliving thing... concept made form, screaming as we ripped it from an abstract cradle of nothingness, tearing it and giving it form from the raw void as we passed... And I am all in for this bit of cosmic horror. I have to say, My survival instincts may be broke, but this being actually didn't bring me fear, even with the loads of body horror...
And I'm also absolutely convinced that Tir is the one to blame for it. Battery my ass, that the Mæron (is this right?) is definitely somehow alive.
PS: giving our luck so far, i'm betting that the CEO of BigCorp™ is coming instead of a simple technician.
Hey uhh CryptidDog i'm not sure but did i say this or Marrowyn
I was NOT prepared for this update 😳
Amazing update! I can't wait until the next one comes out. This project has easily become one of my favorites! Keep up the amazing work!
Question!
I just started playing and I may be behind but
Will Marrowyn get a redesign?? If not that's fine, I love him either way!
I'm just wondering hehe....
I was wondering the same thing!
He perfectly fine the way he is... but I see the other character's getting redesigned too so maybe it'll be his time to shine soon!
Ah, my favorite project...
Thank you!
I haven't read this yet but I will read it as it looks interesting (due to comments). Is the MC human or other?
Hm. Nevermind I'ma just read it
FFR if anybody else is reading this, yes the MC is a human. It would be crazy to create an isekai alien ‘abduction’ VN only for the MC to basically be, to us, an alien.
Man I love this story so much.
I'm vibing with the feeling of loneliness and loss being portrayed atm. The music and backgrounds just hit so well.
Cheers to you and all you're doing.
*spoilers
Is it weird that despite the MC's pov I have found nothing that Marrowyn has said or done to be creepy or unexpected?
Maybe I'm just bias for Marrowyn because I'm not so secretly hoping the MC accidentally gets a little bit smooshed by his belly while they are in an elevator or something! Eheheh...
this had me a little confused lol
Spoiler btw
Should be MC talking. This has since been fixed, but thanks!
Alright, I HAD to create an account just to leave a comment;
I absolutely FUCKING love your work! The writing, the setting(Sprites, OST & BGs included, stellar work on the artist/s part), the characters and their idiosyncrasies, the flow, feel, and pacing, and the lore—oh man, don’t even get me started on the lore, enigmas, theories and the copious notes I've filled in my logs while experiencing everyone's route... Because, I just couldn’t get enough of it!!
I am so infatuated by everything, and I can’t wait to see more<3
With that said, Marrowyn for the win. Fite me.
Ps; I was so smitten with Nöcce during Marruk’s route, that I’m seriously considering in creating a fanfiction for him in case he doesn't get an actual route. Because…… I mean, come on! He’s such an adorable giant! (After Marrow, of course. Totally not biased, I swear.)
And sure, you might risk getting nibbled if you get too close, but hey, who wouldn't want a love nibble from a towering cutie like him?
There's just something about his quiet and indifferent stoic countenance that makes me want to hug him and bring a contented smile to his face. :3Sorry for the rent, just stellar work overall and again, can’t wait to see what happens next!
Captain Behl's face reveal is such a vibe :D
you can't just beef up marruk and expect us to focus on the plot
Uhm, hello?! This is sick as hell! Can I see the rest? Can you post it somewhere I can share it?
heck yeah! i have it on insta same username
These are so gooooodD!!!! You drew tUcker SO HOT LMAO! AArgh I don't really have an instagram, I went over and liked them but idk how to share them better! Theyre so good seriously!
thank u! thank u! ^^ u can repost them if u want to i don't really mind
Can I link to your instagram in the post?
I like the game, hehe, but I have a question, did the protagonist always
(Spoiler Warning)
Did the MC always enrraged in the 3rd day?
I could swear he was crying when I readed it first time, maybe I were very tired as I readed this at night, tbh, Idk, I liked it, but if it never happened then I guess its fine
Been here for a year now and I’ve gotta say I’m impressed with the growth of this game! Loving the sprite redesigns so far (especially Marruk) and the music is top tier. The writing of the characters is also very well done and I’m looking forward to future updates. After what they’ve been through, Marruk and Tucker both need a hug and some vacation time that’s for sure.
...this..was a masterpiece...😭 Damn now we're left on a cliff hanger..I need more marrukkk
I have version 2.1 and I could not find your game on itch search and could not find a link in the game I have downloaded to this page either. It would be good to put a link to the game's page or the accounts you post the game under in the games itself so people like me have a easier time finding the game if we forgot to follow you on itch. I only found it because I had the idea to look it up on google.
What is the name of the song when MC hears his mother playing the piano thru his phone before he destroys it ?
I checked the Music Hall and I didn't find it. It is so soothing
Clair De Lune by Claude Debussy
I don't think it is :(
The song sounds more like a synth / orchestral soothing sound.
Claire De Lune is vastly different
Ah I thought it might’ve been a variation or something. I’m not great at distinguishing music
Search in Youtube for " claire de lune ethereal remix".
rhoun is adorable, and marruk is cute
cant wait for next update